1st person: It was very good like the shots pointing down towards the cars. The editing was good
2nd person: Slyly repetitive of walking shot
3rd person: More street shots
4th person: Real moody blue feeling suits the theme of the music video, cut to other shots and certain moments. Background issue with a girl that is in shot and then out then in.
What we plan to do
The feedback was very useful to us and is going to help us to improve our music video. for the repetitive walking scene we are going add more scenes of the singer walking but in different locations in a sequence to show traveling. To work on the 3rd persons feedback we are going to include more street shots in the music video not only of the singer but of transport and public. we are going to add new shots of scenes so there isn't long shots of one scene which was suggested by the 4th feedback person. we are then going try crop out the background girl or blur the background image.
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